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LUCID is a 2015 Filipino (Visayan) Neo Noir/Thriller short film written and directed by Cloyd Winstanley. It stars PJ Pagalan, Kor Garces and Dennis Flores. This is the 9th short film Cloyd has directed (8 of which he also wrote) and the fourth to be entered in a film festival.
Directed by Cloyd Winstanley
Produced by Phoenix Multimedia
Screenplay by Cloyd Winstanley
Story by Cloyd Winstanley
Starring
PJ Pagalan
Kor Garces
Dennis Flores
Evelyn Otoc
Marilyn Evanghelista
Cinematography Cloyd Winstanley
Edited by Cloyd Winstanley
Production company Phoenix Films / Phoenix Multimedia
Release date June 20, 2015
Running time 15 minutes
Country Philippines (Cagayan de Oro City
Language Visayan, English, Maranao
Plot
Phillip (PJ Pagalan) finds himself walking in the middle of a busy bridge, somewhat disoriented as to why and how he got there. He points to the sky as if touching a painting and saw the whole scenery turned to a ripple, like water in a pond.
His disorientation increased when he suddenly finds himself inside a Motorella (a public transportation which uses a motorcycle; similar to that of a “tuk-tuk” in Thailand) with a beautiful girl, Jamailah (Kor Garces). Phillip and Jamailah (which at first he calls “Mai”) argues about their one night stand which supposedly happened three weeks earlier.
Both were then transported into an open grass field which Jamailah refers to as her “house”. They continued on resolving their scandalous affair. Phillip suspects he is dreaming because he couldn’t read the text messages in his cellphone.
Phillip then finds himself in Jamaila’s room which appears to be an unfinished and abandoned house. She warns her that he shouldn’t be in her room for if her boyfriend finds out, he would surely beat him up. Jamailah’s landlady peeks in her room and suspects that they are having an affair and is not in favor of it. Indeed, Jamailah’s boyfriend, Khalil (Dennis Flores), arrives in their house. In panic, Phillip suggests that he would pretend he is gay so not to agitate her boyfriend’s destructive temper and to avoid being beaten up. When confronted, he did pretend he is gay which convinced Khalil and let him go outside with Jamailah.
Both are now transported to an empty pathway. They started reconciling their differences and found out that Jamailah still has feelings for him despite the uncertainty. Jamailah decide’s to go back to her room to her unsuspecting boyfriend while Phillip finally confirms to himself that he is in fact in a dream and he can control everything-including making a gun appear.
Jamailah went back her room to find out that Khalil knows about her and Phillip. This made him burst into anger and vowed to find Phillip and kill him.
Phillip went back in Jamaila’s house with a gun and finally shoots Khalil.
Phillip wakes up in the real world beside Jamailah who appears asleep. Phillip walks away from the bed, unaware that Jamailah is dead due to a gun shot on her forehead.
Cast
PJ Pagalan as Phillip
Kor Garces as Jamailah
Dennis Flores as Khalil
Evelyn Otoc as The Landlady
Marilyn Evanghelista as The Neighbor
Production
Cloyd woke up from a lucid dream one early dawn in October 2014 and was bothered about it. He wrote it down on his laptop like a diary.
“In my dream, I was with my Christian-Maranao friend and we were talking inside a motorella. Then she invited me to her house and her boyfriend showed up. He was so pissed and I was afraid that time though we weren’t doing anything bad. The only defense mechanism I came up with at that moment was to pretend I was gay. I knew that time that I was in the middle of a dream state so I decided to go outside and get a gun then shoot him. In my dream, I said the exact words that Phillip said before pulling the trigger. The gunshot woke me up eventually. It was a really strange dream and I was bothered by it. But dreams are supposed be like that - not make sense."
In January 2015, an old friend, Theion Macalam, offered Cloyd to produce a film on the condition that he would also act in it. Cloyd thought of his lucid dream and went over what he wrote. Despite his friend’s reluctance of the strange plot, he suggested that this would make a good short film and wrote the first draft of the script. He conducted an intense research on lucid dreaming.
Cloyd used the name Phillip in reference to his favorite science fiction author Phillip K. Dick, who also in his life suffered from psychosis and hallucinations due to drug use. He used the name Jamailah as it would fit the nickname “Mai” in which reference he would not reveal. Khalil is a reference to Cloyd's favorite author Khalil Gibran and it is also the name of his Maranao friend in College. As a fan of the the Film Noir and Neo Noir genre, Cloyd decides that he would shoot the film in Black and White. He cites films like Inception, Paprika, Nightmare on Elm Street and Dreamscape as his major inspirations. He quotes Sigmund Freud and a line from the movie Inception at the beginning of the film.
Cloyd first approached model/beauty queen Sherelyn Doloriel for the role of Jamailah but she was reluctant to commit. NCAA Arts Fest Best Actor nominee Jameelon Rivera, a good fiend of Cloyd’s, was asked to play Khalil but refused (At least seven actresses were interviewed and auditioned for the part of Jamailah before it was given to Kor). Theion went overseas and the project was shelved.
In May 2015, Cloyd heard about the Puerto Layag Film Festival through artist Rhyan Casiño, the event organizer. Cloyd reopened and rewrote the script and expressed that wanted to join the festival. He felt that LUCID’s very strange and controversial plot did not fit the criteria for the festival’s wholesome and positive theme so he pleaded to Rhyan that he would accept his entry even though it surely won’t win. Cloyd committed to start production once his travel documentary with the I am Walrus foundation would commence.
Cloyd met with Barangay Guapo 2013 Grand Winner PJ Pagalan at a production meeting on a proposed MTV shoot with acoustic band Jenzpeak. PJ expressed his interest in acting and Cloyd thought that he would be perfect to play Phillip.
Only 2 weeks before the deadline of submission and Cloyd still
doesn’t have a Jamailah and a Khalil. He asked Dulaang Atenista
and local indie film actor Dennis Flores to play Khalil. He thought
it would be a perfect contrast for his frail appearance for him to
have an explosive temper. Model Rain Rafal was asked to play
Jamailah and she committed.
Only 2 days to go before the shooting schedule, upon reading
the final script, Rain backed out from the shoot for personal
reasons. She felt she could not portray the sexy character and
was apprehensive about the kissing scene in which she already
had agreed during the meeting. She recommended her close
friend, model and beauty queen Kor Garces. Cloyd met with Kor
the day before the scheduled shoot at a Gil Macaibay Fashion
Show.
Filming
Saturday, May 30th 2015 was the first shooting day. The cast and crew met at Kor’s Boutique, Denim Dollhouse. Two hours before the scheduled shoot, Kor expressed hesitation with a couple of details on the script, She would agree on the kissing scene but was apprehensive that she would be wearing underwear in one shot and would say the word “fuck” a few times in one scene. She was, that time, the reigning Miss Pangantukan (Bukidnon) and was afraid it would give her a bad image. After Cloyd finally convinced her, she finally agreed to it on the condition that the particular dialogue would be revised. That day, they shot the Motorella scene around city proper, then the grassy vacant lot and the empty pathway around the SM area.
The next day, they shot the empty room scene at an abandoned house in Camaman-an, this time with Dennis Flores. Kor was the one who suggested the place because they did a photo shoot in the same place with photographer Joey Baldoza. Joey also shot some behind the scene stills during the shoot and provided Cloyd with a 35mm f1.8 lense. Kristine Rafal was on the set as production assistant while Kor’s boyfriend Ken Rumarate was the lighting director.
On June 6th, Cloyd went to upper Puerto to shoot a scene with businesswoman Evelyn Otoc. The festival requires that at least one resident from Puerto should be a cast member. Cloyd shot all close ups of Evelyn behind an unfinished building to create the illusion that they were all shot in the same room together with Kor, PJ and Dennis. Evelyn only appeared in three shots in the original edit of the film.
Upon submission and initial viewing of the film, the Puerto Layag committee were a bit dissatisfied with the very short exposure of a Puerto resident (Evelyn Otoc). Bgy. Captain Achas offered his help in providing transportation and reqested that Cloyd would extend Evelyn’s scenes. The next day, Cloyd reshot the scenes with Evelyn, and another Puerto resident Marilyn Evanghelista this time together with Dennis Flores at the same location in Camamanan.

Cloyd shoots a scene with PJ Pagalan and Kor Garces. Cloyd explains that he keeps the set mood calm, friendly and fun; unlike traditional directors who are rather strict and intimidating. "I want them to have a memorable experience rather than a traumatic one." Photo by Joey Baldoza
Reception
LUCID was not commercially received unlike the phenomenal reception from the masses for his previous film, UseSomebody. Aside from a few critics, it did however receive positive responses from other film directors and film majors.
Critical response
Here are actual positive and (mostly) negative audience’s response after viewing the film (2 public showings after the festival).
“The ending gave me Goosebumps!” – ‘Papa Ardie’, Radio Personality and Government employee.
“The part where the girl (Jamailah) started speaking Maranao, it gave me Goosebumps. There is a scene though that I wasn’t really convinced with her acting. – A local indie film director

“The Maranao boyfriend’s (Khalil) physical appearance did not convince me. The girl was supposed to be mad in that scene but it appears that she isn’t.” – A teacher in Bulua National High School
Cloyd’s response: “I intentionally made Khalil Physically frail to put a shocking effect to his destructive temper, rather that stereotyping a contrabida-like character. The part where Jamailah is so mad at Phillip but did not explode to anger was intentional. If you understand her character, an intelligent woman like her doesn’t need to break loose even when she’s really very angry. I think that’s why Kor won Best Actress. She outdid everyone.”
“I think your film is offensive to the Muslim culture.” – A teacher from
Liceo University
Cloyd’s response: “No, It isn’t. It is offensive to anybody who is
pretending to be Muslim. When I studied Islam, I learned that
Muslims are actually God fearing, peace loving and very
conservative; a total opposite of the public’s preconceived notion.
To fully understand this film, one should shed off ignorance and
be open minded about reality.”
“It could’ve been better without any music at all.” – A local indie film
producer
Cloyd’s response: “Maybe that’s your style. I edited the whole film. I listened to it without music. It just doesn’t work. Besides, I want to make it more ‘commercial’"
"Kulba...My type of film...murag 'mind fucked' and dating!" - Grey Em Erezo, Award-Winning Indie Film Director
Awards
LUCID won Best Director and Best Cinematography for Cloyd Winstanley and Best Actress for Kor Garces. It was Kor’s first acting award and her first acting stint.

This scene was supposed to be shot mostly using a tripod but Cloyd accidentally left it at Kor's Botique and didn't bother to get it. Photo by Joey Baldoza
Cloyd explaining the scene to Kor Garces as Dennis Flores (at the back) waits for his turn. Mae Rafal and Ken Rumarate looks on. Photo by Joey Baldoza